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Box opening 1st page sketch
The vibe is teleporting to her pussy in the last panel, it's not disappearing.
Next comic up to page 6 (some updates in the first 3 pages)
Anything from dialogue to art might get changed.Still missing the title on the first page.Also, I wrote "name" instead of the name of the local she's going to (on page 5) because I'm still not sure what it's gonna be. I'm really indecisive with this stuff haha
Next box suggestions
Do you have any suggestions for what should be in the next twitter follower milestone box?The idea is for the options to ramp up progressively in crazyness. For instance, later options could be a mimic chest tentacle monster, heavy bondage gear with a fuck machine for her ass... stuff like that.In every box there will be at least one option that helps her out (most likely just -3k for her release but you can suggest other stuff too).And one of th...
One quick thing
Does "better locked away" sound like broken english?English is not my first lenguage and sometimes I'm not sure if something sounds right or not. Maybe it's just one of those things where you repeat something in your head until it sounds weird?
Page 6 color
I'll be doing a couple adjustments to each page and post them in one post.After that I'll either start with the next three pages (probably the last ones) or do the 4k milestone comic first (if I'm already there).
Page 5 color
I'll try moving the bubbles or cut a bit of the dialogue in the middle top panel so you can see the figure better.And a couple more adjustmentsEDIT: also will probably change the "starsucks" name lol
Page 5 progress
Colors might change
Finished page 4
I'll probably add Eileen's face to her orange profile picture for the final version
Page 6 ink
I didn't include the phrase she writes on herself because I'm still not sure it's gonna be "i don't deserve to use this" since it's pretty long.I do like that phrase because at the start she can interpret it as a playful denial thing and later relize she's making her write that because she actually doesn't want her to be able to use it again.So I'd like to find something like that but in 3-4 words. Can'...
Page 5 ink
There's a good chance I change some of her faces.
Page 5 1/2 ink
I'm gonna change the design of the cage to this more simple one. I was basing the previous one on a cage I saw suggested for people with foreskin to avoid pinching. But I relized I like the simpler design way better, the other one was kind of annoying to draw and fuck it, if she gets pinching she'll have an excuse to not wear panties in future comics too.I'll probably make it metal instead of pink plastic too.
Page 4 ink
I might change the word "bulls" in her description since she would have to be in a relationship to call them bulls (I think that's how cuckolding works?) and I'm not sure she's going to be.
Page 6 sketch
Like I said before, I was gonna change what she writes on herself. I like this way better. I don't think it will end up being the title though.Btw, the main character's name is Robin, I haven't mentioned it yet. I have to include it somewhere in the comic, not sure where.
Page 5 sketch and page 4 with tweaked dialogue
Btw I'll probably end up srinking her dick a bit for the final versions. Happened to me with the first Jeni comic too, I don't know why haha. I guess at first I try to make it small but "keep it realistic" but later change my mind. Cause there's not really such thing as "too small" in a SPH comic, you know
First batch of 3 pages for the third comic
I think I'll be giving tier 1 patrons access to batches of three pages once thei're mostly finished. I'll try it for this comic at least.The first page is missing the title (wich I'm not set on yet) and I might add a bit more dialogue to fill the dead space.
Page 1 color
Apart from the title, I'll probably add more text to fill the dead space.Colors might get tweaked.EDIT: Tweaked some colors
Page 2 ink
I might chill a bit with the precum in the last panel, I'll see how it looks when colored. It's probably fine like this though.
Three first pages, sketched and with text
She won't be naked like that, I'll draw her with cute thigh highs and stuff.I think the title will be what she writes on herself later on, but I'm not sure it will be "good riddance". I'm trying to think of something else.
First two pages sketches
Like last time, I'll finish three pages, then continue with the next three, etc.This time I'll add the text right after sketching to make sure everything fits properly. It's better for the work-flow, I was just being stubborn about it before just like with writing thte text with the brush.EDIT: Honestly, I'm looking at it now and maybe I should change the first two panels in the second page. It looks like she wants to make out wit...
Some character design sketches for the next comic and the script draft
I changed it from "she gets carried away" to "she gets tricked".I really wanted to make this one shorter but I just get carried away lol. I'll try to fit more panels in each page to compensate.Anything might get changed.Hope the way the script is written is not too confusing and you can actually tell what's going on. Also, keep in mind the dialogue is chat convos so there'll be emotes and stuff and it'll feel less ...
Trimmed up and almost done
Probably will upload the final version tomorrow
THE PUBES POLL
What should I do with Ashrah's pubes?EDIT: Poll will end in less than a day, more than half a day
