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Rewrite the Stars 5 - Update
This is going to be a short post, kind of a very impulsive decision on my part.Two days ago I made this post, where I shared my plans going forward. The first step, as I shared, was writing the script, and I estimated that could take one or two weeks.Welp, turns out I underestimated how much I'd already thought about the story and what I wanted to happen. The script is done.There were two big decisions/plot points I hadn't made up my mind...
Road to Rewrite the Stars V
After so many months, Rewrite the Stars IV has ended. Usually I'd take a trip to the Caribbean to relax and enjoy my freedom.But I don't have that kind of money, so I guess I'll just start working on the next comic right away!I just want to share how the process is going to be. My roadmap to RtS5 has the following steps: Write the script â Determine the number of pages. (1 OR 2 WEEKS) Design the lineup of all the main character. (PR...
Rewrite the Stars IV || ENDING + EXTRAS!!!!!!!!
Thank you for making this story possible!This is the final page of 'Rewrite the Stars IV: Secrets'. This volume is now completed, and I can't stress it enough: it's only possible thanks to YOU, patrons. Without your support, I wouldn't be able to take so many hours of my time to draw a passion project like this.I'm leaving you the PDF versions in Spanish and English so you guys can download the story and enjoy it in HQ whe...
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The importance of secrets...One more page to go. I'm gonna take a week or so before I do it so I can catch up with some rewards and commissions, but man, crazy to think I'm almost done with this issue of the comic.Next week, or whenever it's ready, I'll be posting: The last page of the comic. The "Thank You" page with the name of all the patrons. The "Extra Illustration" page. The HQ .pdf files both in English and ...
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Nothing's gonna be the same.
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When we're underneath the lightsMy heart's no longer brokenFor a momentJust for a moment...Can't believe you guys thought they'd just do the dirty on a sandy shore in the middle of the night 2 minutes after their first kiss lol READ THE ROOM.If you wanted to see them play 'hide the salami' that would have to be a separate comic, like a RtS 4.5, but no one would want that..........
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Time to make up for lost time.
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Happy Valentine's Day!
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Ladies and gents, this is the moment you've waited for.
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SAY THAT IT'S POSSIBLE
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Lovestruck boy DESTROYS cautious girl with FACTS and LOGIC.
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Lynn brings up her counterpoints.
Weekly update!
Hello everyone! Last update of the month.The new page is in progress. Probably will be ready for tomorrow, though I can't make any promises.I'm hiding the sketch and the lineart progress, but I'll leave you the panel scheme:You may be thinking "Hmm, these panels look familiar". Well, yes, that's because it mirrors the panel distribution of the previous page. If this was a printed comic, these two pages would be side by sid...
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It's up to her. And it's up to him.
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No more letting others control their lives..I can't believe no one got the song!
Weekly update!
Another monday, another weekly update.As you know, we've gotten quite a few new pages. We're up to page 30, which is insane, cause now there's only 13 pages left. My goal of finishing the comic before I start a new college semester is right on track.I might take a few days off the comic to work on commission and Patreon rewards, but we're in the endgame now.Not much to share. I haven't played Palworld, probably won't until...
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And so it begins...
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Dreams don't die, do they?
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Lincoln begs her to reconsider.
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Lincoln wasn't ready for that.
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She can't keep hiding the truth.
Weekly update!
Heyoooo!Sorry that I haven't updated you guys lately, but I think you're probably fine, considering that I've posted 11 pages in the past 17 days. That's kinda crazy, isn't it?Regarding the comic, I just want to say that I'm a bit surprised to see how... visceral, I guess?, the reactions are towards Lynn. The comments tend to be reproachful and sometimes even mean, like she's the antagonist of the story.I think you'...
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The cat is out of the bag.
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Lynn shares her version of the story.
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"Lynn, please, talk to me."
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No more secrets. It's time for a heart-to-heart.
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The secret... is finally out.
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Most go to sleep, but Lincoln is approached at midnight.
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Lynn reveals a glimpse of her feelings at the campfire.EDIT: I changed the little speech Lynn has in the third panel. I thought it might have been confusing or misrepresenting what I was going for.
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The family's back together, and things seem to look brighter for Lynn...but are they?

























