clip8806
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🕑 Added 2020-10-09 10:25:11 +0000 UTC 消化されたものが胃の奥へ送られる描写もつけてみました エロいですよね…
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For example the translation of 助けて to "saved" might be better as "spare" in this circumstance. Or when talking about her stomach it's more of a rhetorical question than a statement because of the use of かも ending so I would have put "maybe" in front of that sentence.
SRG
just out of personal curiosity, what's off with it?
Nice work, though I think something might be off about the english translation. I can provide specific examples if you'd like.
奶子就是正义
非常好～就是这样有内部描写的丸吞消化系简直太赞了～希望逐渐有更多的细节被作者绘出～
くりっぷ
ありがとうございます！ 僕も大好きなシチュエーションの一つです。 また別のキャラで描くので楽しみにしていてくださいー！
HydroKirby
シコリティが半端ない 大満足
