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Predators 2 Cover 2
🕑 Added 2023-07-17 06:55:53 +0000 UTCLooking back at the previous cover I made, I didn't like how static it was.
Both of my other comics just have "characters standing there" as the cover, and I suddenly realized I did not want it a third time.. and so, after some more sketching, conceptualizing, and refining, I think I have one that much better displays the dynamic and tone of the piece whilst also being a lot more tease-y. I need some kind of 'censor' for the girls' lower bits, unsure if it should be some aurora, leaves, snowflakes, torn clothes...something, though, for the final piece that feels clean and complete.
I included some un-chosen thumbs too, for funsies and looksies.
Comments
Diamondstorm
Love this, very cute and funny. Both girls nibbling on his arms made me chuckle. Also love how easy it would be to leave them nude and censor everything with a few background elements.
Roarschach
I like the new cover layout! I think the "aurora" style censoring works the best of what you've shown. Though, this would still be a very teas-y cover even if Tala and Bae'li had their regular clothes on...
Shax
Honestly? I'd just leave them nude but with very very careful positioning not include the lower bits. You already almost have it.
justAblank
The new cover sketch looks much better and I think the aroura censor is probably the most on brand for the comic really.
Blobage
I second this. Plus the Aurora censor adds a little teaser for her character into the cover as well
GoldNightCat
I love concept 1, very alluring and gets you set into what will be happening later on. The aroua for the censorship would be a fun one to see completed, but I also like concept 2 for a cover as well. Would love to see just full nude with the same effect of the aurora censor as well. It just so dang good!!
Leo G.
I leave Tala’s lower skirt (but not her top) and Bali’s normal clothes, personally. Sometimes a little clothing is even more suggestive.
Evangellos
While I always like seeing torn clothes especially for convenient censoring purposes, putting it on the cover implies that their clothes do get torn, when that never happens. I think the Aurora censor probably fits the comic better overall.
Antoine Davis
I really like the new cover design, and I think the Aurora censor fits best for the theme.
Markius Fox
Leave the bits of aurora at the top close to the title. Have snowflakes/flurries covering the lady lower bits.
RastaMV
Yeah definitely shows their character and the tone of the scenes to cone better. Big noms.
Quenir
Ooh! Pretty excited to get a physical copy of this at some point!
Rick
I LOVE this design!! Such good characterization and vibes!
Spirit
The Aurora censor fits the theme perfectly. Great Job!
The Friendly Deathclaw
M O N C H!! for the censorship options I like the Aurora censor more than the leaf one personally.
Silvador
I vote the Aurora, since it ties into the comic more. It looks like a fun comic cover and really fits the attitude of the story and characters. :D
pokediginut
I’m fond of the Aurora myself
JerrylulFOX
Cool!
