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Predators of Denali - Page 79 HD
🕑 Added 2023-06-24 12:08:39 +0000 UTCPage 79!
There's a few dynamics here I wanted, and hope, get across. One, Kiga's reluctance to Tala's idea, but still accepts it. He's a stubborn jerk, but he's not evil, and still wants what's best for the pack. Two, Bae'li's more active role in the meeting contrasting her total absence in the beginning.
Then Tala, immediate relief and kind of a high going through her enough to mildly act on her bear-curious-ness that's been hinted at earlier once or twice in the comic, and very clearly joke-flirt with Aska as a result. I wanted Aska's reaction to be justified--he's not the kind to creep on Tala, so I needed some interaction where it's very clear from Tala that she's the instigator and is trying to get that reaction from him, and he kind of mimics the rapid-internal-thoughts from Tala drinking the soup earlier with Massak.
Not long left to go! I will have to go do the next page after Anthrocon, but there's still some good ideas and surprises in store for the finished/whole product.
The blue-haired wolf is a 25$ tier cameo from DarkriderZX of their OC 'John'
Comments
Diamondstorm
I just realized Baeli is going to stay with the wolves... we might get Kiga back with a crushed pelvis lol
FluffKevlar
Thanks! I needed a wolf cameo, I actually forgot to mention it in the post, lmao.
MartinC
Damn, Tala's on fire !
MC
I’m hoping we get a flashback on how Bailey convinced him to let her blow him under the table or an explanation of their relationship prior to the comic.
The Friendly Deathclaw
I absolutely love Tala's teasing here. great work Fluff!!
Silvador
I'm still hoping this ends with Tala banging bear chief.
justAblank
Didn't have him say "oh bother" in his last line? Missed opportunity I say XP Anyways this is a good page towards closing out and having her be more forward makes sense given what you wanted to have for the last panel and for showing how she's changed from the start of the comic.
pokediginut
Ugh this is so good. Wonder if Baeli is slightly flirting with Kiga. I love how free Tala feels now. And Aska is a lot more sweet then I expected too. He’s gonna screw Tala so good hehe
pokediginut
Lucky
Roarschach
"Tease you later!" Tala hasn't just grown more confident, she's cheeky about it too!
Volpethrope
That blue-haired wolf is a cutie too!
Antoine Davis
So I love everything about this page, the dialogue, expressions/reactions and everything! I really enjoy all the different dynamics for this page from throughout the whole comic. Also, I do wonder what the celebration for a new member is. I also love the joke teasing, for I do see Tala just joking with Aska. I also like how the pages get more and more colorful and bring hope and freedom for like Tala said she's free now. But yeah, love this page and I'll send you the DM soon. Can't wait for the last page.
Rick
I love her new energy! You really captured that "new world of opportunities" feeling
RastaMV
It's you that has to survive her Aska not the other way around. :p
StumpedMoose
Dang, is Tala gonna go for it?
ghostman
Haha ah this comic has been a treat.
Inu-Chan
That internal monologe has me howling!
rain012497
She's gonna drain that poor bear dry lol
