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🕑 Added 2022-09-12 11:14:16 +0000 UTC

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Knight_Delta

It’s ch.1 that I feel to be mediocre, ch.2 is fine sure it has flaws but well Ch.1 is a different thing. In my mind I want to plan the story because if I keep going this route with writing the game is going to be mediocre

warri

if you believe that chapter 2 was mediocre i can understand that, i may disagree but it's your story to write, now if you believe that chapter 2 was mediocre because of feedback then it may be like most feedback in life the negative is easier to listen too than the positive. i don't know how much feedback you received but i think that most people who are happy with a story don't really leave a comment where the people who are unhappy will more likely leave a comment.

Reifon

I don't know who those people are comparing to, but if your work is mediocre, then the vast majority of people's work may be mediocre, I don't see where the mediocrity is, just because your story is still paving the way It is a bit too arbitrary to say that it is mediocre


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