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Bench Warmer Chapter 31
🕑 Added 2024-07-03 17:10:06 +0000 UTCAND! SO! WE CONTINUE!
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Blackmarch
pfft
Alulim Eridug
Also, good chapter. I imagine that Sakura's continuing to cement her reputation as the eerily smart one.
Alulim Eridug
>"Kabuto's backers weren't the sort anyone wanted paying attention to—not even a little." The phrasing here is a little awkward, since you would never say "[I] wanted paying attention to [Kabuto's backers]", and the grammatical structure should be preserved through the phrase movement. It might be better to say "Kabuto's backers weren't the sort anyone wanted the attention of—not even a little," though I can see a couple of other ways it could be changed. Or you could just leave it as-is, it's not as if it's a huge issue.
John
All I heard at the end was... trololo.
