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Chapter 28

🕑 Added 2023-02-08 19:12:38 +0000 UTC

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G

Okay, I couldn’t come up with anything without just saying the obvious so Im going to do some cool villain speech stuff because this chapter alone could create so many villain stories on why they want revenge and I wouldn’t even blame them. 1 - A dude name zel a Lillie with the powers of superman but turns evil and wants to exterminate every Brob for revenge for killing his family and friends and gives a speech to his supporters. “ I was born in this world believing that there could be peace I was a fool I lost my parents same as you all we all have faced tragedy in our lives losing our homes, parents, loved ones, and even our children but no more What I do now no matter how cruel, violent, or even inhumane is for the greater good of my people, my brother, and sisters that is my soul purpose and I won't stop until every last Brob and Guv ARE WIPE OUT FROM THE FACE OF THE EARTH THAT I SWEAR TO YOU!!” 2 - Okay a terminator story where future Louis tries to save the future by going to the past but sees the AI that has decided to kill all of humanity and explains why to him “ why do you humans keep fighting the inevitable and even if you win what do you think will happen it will just go back to how things where before I came to be humans killing human as if was a game thinking they are superior to the other you are fighting a losing battle Louis a future where people like you will only suffer more than what I'm doing already I’m offing an end to the cruel and endless cycle to death I think your parent would agree right? Why fight for these people who would kill you on the spot if they had the chance when I offer true peace to his pathetic world.” 3 - okay this basically a Thanos storyline Endgame version but a lilies name Kronos or took the name to since he has the power of god with the gauntlet of power and faces an older Louis and Nick to reverse what he did to the Brobs and Guvs with it “ I wanted to believe that you accept my gift to you all that you would thrive under the new freedom from the all the pain but, you two want to bring it all back for what to have your friend back and risk the lives of others for one Brob. What I'm going to do you two annoying little specks I’m going to enjoy it very very much.”

G

First I want to say this was an amazing chapter showing how no matter how beautiful and happy going the world can be there will always be cruel and unfair aspects about only in this world is way worse and flat-out racist or sizeist in these terms and can’t wait to see the interaction between Jeannine and Saverine okay now I got that out the way (clear throat). WHAT, WHAT NO ONE WANTS TO BLAME BROBS FOR THEIR SUFFERING AND PAIN BOTH PHYSICALLY AND MENTALLY!!. I mean more strength to them but If it was me hell no I don't care how big they are we fighting, building an army, all kinds of weapons, and about turn WW3 or look like the freaking terminator but anywho again great chapter story just keeps getting better and I’m here for it.

Jake Barry

I think so too. I enjoy writing about the human spirit overcoming hardship and rejecting victimhood.

Acrophite

I love her realization that people are not blaming the world, but they are moving forward. Yeah, life can suck sometimes, and you see some extreme evil, but things will be better even when that seems impossible. Good lesson to learn


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