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Chapter 19

🕑 Added 2022-11-30 17:27:49 +0000 UTC

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Jake Barry

I felt like switching to someone new for a change. Glad it was an enjoyable read!

Acrophite

Been a bit behind. Glad I’m catching up now. Very well done backstory for these two. Didn’t expect that, but pleased to have these characters fleshed out!

G

Oh really I didn’t think they would be that good but thanks

Jake Barry

These are much better ideas. The scope fits with that of MG, I think. You seem very interested in Provecta so maybe I’ll do something with it. I’ll see if I can fit it into the timeline, but no promises.

Jake Barry

Maybe I’ll mention it sometime. The fate of Provecta is currently unknown.

G

Okay now for my favorite part. Okay, I finally realized that my predictions were too wide and big when I should I thought smaller so here goes. 1 - Icarus finds out that Provecta is close to being fully rebuilt but the government is looking for people like him and his dad to help lead new inventors and people with skills to build new tech that can help Lilliputian people all around. He and Daedalus discuss this with each first then with Jeaninne and Nick. Icarus is left with the choice to either stay and only help the people of MG or go back to Provecta to help more people. 2 - Nick and Icarus talked about the decision telling him and Daedalus that with their ideas and skills he has the ability to help not only Lilliputian citizens but Reamnets and borrowers as well. But would always mean leaving MG and the people here. Icarus thinks about what he should do but comes up with an idea. 3 - Icarus goes and talks with Daedalus about his plan that can help with making their decision about either leaving MG or going back to help rebuild Provecta but would lead to a big choice for both him and his Dad that would forever affect their relationship either making weaker or stronger.

G

First, That back story went from zero to a hundred really fast not going to lie like damn. Second Fuck the Brob government as always because honestly what is their problem what did the Lilies do to get all this disrespect and death like dude what happen between yall and them. third amazing chapter goes into Daedalus and Icaru's characters and backstory showing their tragic past but still having a hopeful future while still having each other and their new friends. I'm actually interested in knowing what the situation looks like for Provecta now after how long it has been. Like was it rebuilt to its former glory or still being rebuilt hope we got back to that later on.


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