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Chapter 78

🕑 Added 2025-04-29 08:18:47 +0000 UTC

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Halycon404

Yeah. It's s become an ensemble. Except the rest of the cast isn't that interesting. The junior sister was, till she was refined into a ditzy gluten. The cat has mysteries, but just bends to the MC's every whim easily. Everyone else is Standard Xainia Template Character #X. All these points of view could be used for world building but they are more used to reinforce world building that's already been established instead of expanding the world. Forcing the MC out of the sect could have been a chance to kickstart some sort of plot and progression. There hasn't been any sort urgency in many chapters.

EsZeus

My main problem with the story is, that it's less about the MC and more about what's happening around him. All the time. It's very boring now. The start of the story was promising. But instead of focusing on the MC alone, and maybe only sometimes going with other characters, it's a boring and simple mix of everything thats around the MC, and not nearly enough about the MC. Sad


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