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-Early Access- Captive comic Chapter 2 (page 12- 15)
🕑 Added 2023-10-29 18:41:26 +0000 UTCWe're almost at the conclusion of this chapter! When I wrote this chapter, I was afraid this part would be too cheesy (And then I wrote my third chapter and it felt more cheesy lmao!)!
I don't know if it is noticeable but I'm starting to be tired of shading every page haha! I will go back into flat colors for the rest of the comic (once this chapter concluded)! Plus it will really train my lineart skill! I'd appreciate it greatly if I can improve it! (See I try to motivate myself into this decision haha! I usually hate my lineart+ flat)!
Initially Miguel's brother wasn't in this story. I usually HC him as dead (as part of Miguel's several losses mentioned in the official artbook) but I kept thinking about very cute and funny moments Miguel and the spider heroes could have thanks to this character!
So dear Gabriel is resurrected and he will be part of this chapter bonus content and also in chapter 3 bonus content!
Comments
yakichou
I am glad you think so!
yakichou
He is as stubborn as Miguel but differently haha!
jules
Peter refusing to let go is so cute ππ
Brookie
So. Sweet! π₯Ή
gaygerthelame
Sony needs to introduce/show Gabriel in a flashback or something in the next movie because we Needβ’οΈ him ASAP keep up the hard work!!!! π©΅β¨
yakichou
Peter is working is magic! I try to keep Miguel's universe like in the movie! :) The BG also has sketches lines but it is not very visible! Thanks! My partner made Ben's card and it is also my favorite one! He is so dramatic and silly haha Thank you for your comment, it means a lot cause I worked hard on this comic <3 I really appreciate your comments
Amyssra
Peter's smirk is so cute! All that anxiety fading while Peter is being annoying is such a cool detail! Also I love that you leave in the sketch lines for Migs and Gabri, like in the movie! Never noticed that before. Kudos for all the details of the get well cards, loved Ben's especially π β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
yakichou
Gabri is a cutie! I'm glad you are excited! I am working hard on this comic so your comment cheers me up! I hope you'll like the next update!
gaygerthelame
AAUUGGHH GABRI VISITED EVERYDAY OMFGNWJSJKANSA πππ©΅π©΅ so excited to see the ending!!!! π―
SpookySalem
Little brother comfort ππ₯Ίπ₯Ή
SpookySalem
Sobbing in my room while I read this
yakichou
I love siblings being cute π₯Ί
SpookySalem
Waaaaaaaahhhhhh not Gabri visiting πππ Yaki youβre killing me
yakichou
They are!! It is proudly framed next to my workstation π₯Ίβ€ I framed all my baby's creations hehe! there aren't much yet since they're quite young!
Lemon Mango!
Gift from little kids like that are the best ππ
yakichou
For this card I got inspired by my birthday card my baby offered me π₯Ίπ
Lemon Mango!
I totally agree that Miguel seems the type to isolate himself when things become hard, like he feels he has to carry the burden by himself π so glad Peter is there to stop him π₯Ίπ also love all the little details you included on the get well soon cards. That card from Peter & Mayday with her little handprints is precious π₯Ήπ
