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Chapter One Hundred and Seventy-Nine. Advancements and Audiences.

🕑 Added 2021-10-04 22:01:01 +0000 UTC

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Nathan

Unclear sentence: "Nora had spent a lot of time" - by the rest of the sentence, I think you mean "Nora hadn't spent"

John L.

You might want to check the math on the number of crystals for the king; I don't think the breakdown adds up correctly. 5% of 2,581,200 is 129,060 (10% total would be 258,120).

Adam Roundfield

And it will be a beautiful moment in history, followed by overwhelming awkwardness...

Alessandro

I have the feeling that Bob, who hates authority figures, will acquire a noble rank

Milton Skipper

*starts to hear music in the background and chants saying "Dragon is coming, a dragon is coming." :)

Scott Frederiksen

Cool!

Gabriel

Thank you!

Richard Reid

You just have to remove the word moved πŸ™‚ which I have now done thanks!

Leigh Ganschow

I'm sorry - but I just can't understand this sentence well enough to propose a fix.... "Stalking to his audience chamber, he moved considered his day."

Leigh Ganschow

but he doesn't see at his duty, - - - > but he doesn't see it as his duty,

0xFFF1

It'd certainly be quite the diplomatic mission

Morton

Nah.. I think it would be more along the lines of the wave hits while Bob and the king are talking, SecDef shows up with an Endless kid (probably Eddie) cause he wants to see the wave.

Andrew

Thank you!

Andre Washington

hehe, wouldn't it be informative if the king and the secdef happened to both be present for a meeting. ^_^

David Talpos

Can their weapons even penetrate a dragons scales?

Mike G.

Good thing the active Marines haven't deployed with heavy AA assets yet :)

Stephen

This is a meeting I'm looking forward to.

David Talpos

That would be hilarious, like the sec of def tries to argue with Bob, but than BOOM drago king appears.

Bunny Waffles

Yay! I was expecting someone else was gonna have to do the scaring, but since the King himself is heading over for a little visit, that means that maybe he will get to scare some sense into the "nobles" of Earth!

Michael Marisa

Nice. Looking forward to more Bob!

Tequila Worm

Darn

Tequila Worm

1st almost lmao

Morton

Yeah new chapter! Thank you! (First)


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