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An Otherworldly Scholar - 194

🕑 Added 2025-01-15 02:15:40 +0000 UTC

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Trevayne

Thanks for the chapter.

Paul McGlynn

I agree, it was clumsy. I'm also disappointed that Lyra's reaction to learning that Rob was a Runeweaver was completely glossed over. She was a scholar who got kicked out of the academy for coming too close to the truth about runes, I would have thought we'd get to get a description a bit more detailed than "priceless". What sort of questions would she ask? How would that change the way she interacted with Rob? What sort of innovation could she bring to the table now that she found out that Runeweaving was possible? What's the point of writing about something if all the interesting stuff is going to be summarized in one sentence? Same with explaining that the System was artificial to Izabeka; that was just a "so I told her it was artificial and she was kind of upset. anyway, and after that I went...". In fact, we only got "huh, that explains the enchanted stuff" from Kiln, and then that "oh heck you're a runeweaver" exchange was never elaborated on or expanded upon. What was even the point of Rob conjuring up Lyra's reaction with [Mirage] in the first place if not to replay the scene and describe it to the readers after the fact? Ever since Elincia told Rob that 'Runeweaver' was a quasi-Legendary class and that he needed to be very careful not to let anybody know, I had been anticipating people's reactions to learning that a legendary Runeweaver was in their midst. I thought it would be more than literally nothing. But at this rate I don't even think revealing the truth to Prince Adrien will get so much as a passing reference. It's honestly a let-down.

ElAyVee

You do not want to use flamethrower inside a tunnel, unless you can survive without breathing.

Ben Bass

TYFTC! Great to see that the orphanage is growing, although with a bunch of the ‘original’ kids off at school it is going to be harder to instill the culture they had earlier. I think they will get there over time. In the grand scheme of things one year isn’t that much to get a crop of kids in shape and up to Rob’s “standards”. Now as to the skittering, you should definitely listen to those who work and spend time in a place, they better than anyone else will know when things are right or wrong.

Sam S

..."Lyra opened the lid, and steam flowed from the opening..." steam-> fog ... steam is evaporation due to boiling. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fog

Jouni Osmala

Well, what happens when they get a letter from academy where kids tell them about how they feel about being imperial academy without giving any secrets and in passing mention certain archivist by name. Assuming that everything they send could be read by someone else and the name alone is the main message hidden in a normal letter from kids to their family.

jaskij

You really didn't do a good job showing the time skip. It took me halfway through the chapter before I was sure there was one.

Weird_Medic

It's great seeing how far they came from, but the bigger you are, the more attention you attract. Curious to see how the orphanage will deal with that.

Matthew

Tunnel fighting anything that lives in the farlands sounds like a double helping of "hell no" with a generous drizzle of "only if I can have a flamethrower"


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