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An Otherworldly Scholar - 171

🕑 Added 2024-10-26 22:41:19 +0000 UTC

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Ben Bass

TYFTC! Oooh, system scrubbing! Does it just scrub the system and leave some or all of the skills? That would explain the aerokinesis that the Greyfangs used in the fight. If it does remove some abilities, I wonder if can be used as punishment and a way to ‘neuter’ very strong system users…

David Ellis

I don't know if you read the entire fanfic I wrote; Elincia isn't actually there, that was an anxiety-driven nightmare for Rob (I even had the dagger change into a knife to show inconsistency in the narrative). But I do think Elincia has not been utilized well in the story for a while, and has been entirely too passive given her characterization at the beginning of the story, someone who has always lived in the System and yet still went into the Farlands and *thrived* despite not having the right Class and despite being shunned by most people because of it, all because it was her dream to be a Hunter and her desire to keep her father figure's orphanage alive. Since around the dinner murder mystery arc, Elincia has been entirely too passive and has not had any impact on the story progression. I would like to see that change (and I wish I could add new lines on mobile).

ElAyVee

I really hope not. Teenage lover's drama at this point in the story when the stakes are so high would be a huge turn-off for me. Obviously the similarity between Pyrra and Elicia is likely going to play a role, but I hope that can be kicked down the road when we return to Farcrest.

David Ellis

Suddenly, another figure burst into the tent. "Not after you went on an adventure without me! I fucking love adventures," Elincia exclaimed. Then she took out a dagger and pointed it at me. "And you made me think you were dead!" "H-how are you here," I stammered. "I followed Ginz's kidnappers! And what are you doing with my cousin," she asked icily. "I-," I started to say, but Elincia jabbed her knife into my eye. "Waagh!" I exclaimed as I sat up. It was morning in the camp, and I realized that I had a lot to make up to Elincia, even if it was all the logical course of action, it wasn't the *right* one that I had taken with her.


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