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An Otherworldly Scholar - 23

🕑 Added 2023-06-21 22:53:57 +0000 UTC

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Leonard Marchant

Suggestion - "You would cross a weilder of the flame of Anor?" *Something about erupting in fire* "None shall pass!" I've always felt that the climax of epicness should be very concise, in this case it is the flames, with the words before as quiet buildup, and those after in support.

Leonard Marchant

The servant of the secret flame thing is a bit too goofy, kind of ruins the vibe of what would've been an epic scene

Ruathim

I still have no idea why after all this time, fuck around and find out hits me with a shot of dopamine. Great chapter!


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