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Mercenary of Lastia - BtLH - Ch 44

🕑 Added 2024-06-17 21:02:35 +0000 UTC

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Aphanvahrius

"Fire at will", in an era before firearms they would probably say something like "loose/release/shoot at will" instead "She fired her other arrows" Same here, but since it's not dialogue it doesn't matter as much I suppose. "Lys loosed her second shot. Lys loosed another arrow, watching it arc" Feels a bit repetitive. Maybe the second one could be skipped and it could be referring to the first one as "She watched it arc[...]"?

Julian1701

Shouldn't this be chapter 44?

Jonathan Wint

At this point If someone finds out Lys is a girl and tells the Sargent he will Kill them For treason!

JHD

Thats one way to keep a low profile😅

Thomas Corbin

This story is really amazing.


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