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Mercenary of Lastia - BtLH - Ch 12-13

🕑 Added 2024-05-17 17:53:00 +0000 UTC

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Aphanvahrius

"at a mountain stream, flowing down from the mountain" You could remove the first "mountain" I think "Lys made pushed" Should probably be without the "made" "an the foliage" Should probably be without the "an"

Youri A.

Thanks for the chappie! really liking this book too! Can't wait to see her discover and grow her skills and powers :)


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