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Rebirth as a Wind Cultivator - Chapter 28

🕑 Added 2024-11-07 01:54:35 +0000 UTC

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Erios909

"The replacement magistrate—a minor official she’d promoted—would have to deal with the mess."

lenkite

err..what happened with the city magistrate ? Is that a TODO for later ?

Aphanvahrius

"people five years the game even began" -> "people five years before the game even began"

Apoca

Ren Chun is the kind of fool who would kill a corpse cultivator because that's Evil

Sean

Thank you!

Erios909

Before it was space * space, now i made it bigger

Sean

I'm seeing it now but I don't remember that from earlier.

Erios909

Did the space and * scene break not show up for you?

The Lost Pages

I would echo the confusion as well. Could be cleaned up a bit.

Jonathan Wint

Ren Chun She OWNS his Soul Now! Is she an infernal Cultivator? OH NO WORSE A FEMALE!

Ronny Cook

I was confused for a second as well, but picked up the time skip pretty quickly (mansion was damaged, magistrate replaced). It might be relying a bit too much on contextual clues, but the confusion was brief.

Sean

I was a little confused when they were talking about going to the city magistrate and then suddenly they're going to the treasure pavilion. It might just be me but I didn't read that sentence about her going somewhere else as her not going to the city magistrate the first time. I could just be sleepy though, as I've had a long day.

The Lost Pages

Excellent chapter. And poor Ren Chun. Such an innocent and Gullible upholder of justice.

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