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A4 - ShipCore - Chapter 206 – Looming Push

🕑 Added 2023-12-25 01:35:10 +0000 UTC

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Erios909

Abbey literally playing legos with the dead hulks lol

wrecker lawson

Yay salvage! :) don't ask me why but I find stuff like that especially cobbeling together something new and better out of something old interesting an fun I love games with capturing or salvaging mechanics so thanks and marry Christmas

Aphanvahrius

"They were already pressed to full capacity, but urging them to produce with more urgency would likely achieve a minor positive effect." I think the "but" doesn't quite fit there, as the second part of the sentence is not "in opposition" to the part that comes before it. Maybe replacing it with "and" or splitting it into two sentences would be better? Also, the "urging [...] to [...] more urgency" seems a bit clunky. Maybe the "urging" could be replaced with "pushing" or something to avoid the repetition? Anyway, awesome chapter! Can't wait to see what all this will lead to!


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