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Newly Summoned Demoness 2 - Chapter 29 – Dubious Missions

🕑 Added 2023-12-24 14:43:57 +0000 UTC

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Maniac

Maybe the whole door just moves as one?

Wellzie

I can see Tessa getting involved in this, either Elania asks her for help or she just wants to kill some monks as well

Alasdair Macmillan

Actually, the guards have telepathy, so there's no need to use Gaston as a message boy in the first place... (EDIT: maybe change it to "I'll inform Harik that..." ?)

Alasdair Macmillan

Thanks for the chapter! "Inform Harik that..." wasn't Harik Gaston's superior officer? It doesn't make sense for Bannon to pass on orders to someone via their own direct reports (disrespectful, and messes up the chain of command). The correct thing to do would be for Bannon to order Gaston to tell Harik that Bannon wants to see him (and then issue orders in that meeting). The difference is subtle, but Harik should never be ordered around by his direct reports.

M. Lampi

Suggestion: swell unchecked, especially if their inciting unrest ==> swell unchecked, especially if they're inciting unrest

Aphanvahrius

Short people go under the beam and tall people go over it ;)

Jonathan Wint

They need to Deport the LightBringers. Then Bring up the Need to Reduce Concave number after reducing Lighbringers Number and they will fold like a Skyscraper in China!

Kelan

I understand the whole need for care and soft pressure but i sure hope blood is spilled and fear is inflicted :3 And maybe a cliche romancy moment between the two gals ofc

Erios909

don't ask me how the elevator door works, either lol


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