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Newly Summoned Demoness 2 - Chapter 16 - Plans

🕑 Added 2023-12-09 08:43:48 +0000 UTC

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Phsteven

Tbh, I think that, with her current skill set, Elania would make a fantastic overwatch/sniper. She’s maxed out stealth and tracking, and she now has a weapon that works off of her own power so she isn’t as affected by the “super human” nerf to guns in fantasy stories. Her learning human combat might help push her in that direction…. I do agree with you on the whole idiot barrier thing 100% and I think her having issues learning or increasing her current skills might be a way to keep her from quite getting to that point, but we will see.

M. Lampi

Building a shooting arcade could be a profitable endeavor.

No Name

Learning to fight properly is definitively a good idea, but... The way she seems to be planning to go about it, by learning human-style combat, is (by itself) probably one of the least efficient approaches available to growing stronger, in terms of effort and time against results, she could really choose at this point. I'm starting to see the risk of what I personally call an idiot barrier ahead; here is to hoping the author knows how to deal with those properly... I've seen too many stories with great potential get kneecapped by this... (Definition of an idiot barrier: Occurs when the abilities of a character (which are all fully established within the narrative, i.e. the author can't change them without a narrative disconnect) synergize in such a way that the character could grow unstoppably powerful if they cross a particular, and clear, threshold. This is often undesirable for a narrative, so, an idiot barrier is erected at this threshold: The author makes the character in question just... never realize the possibility exists, no matter how obvious the option. Sometimes the author also tries to quietly shift the character onto a less overpowered path by enforcing a focus on abilities with less synergistic potential.)


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