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Newly Summoned Demoness 2 - Chapter 6 – Into the Depths

🕑 Added 2023-11-24 22:30:03 +0000 UTC

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Albedo's Ahoge

Poor Ralaei and Fink.... Nice knowing you. RIP.

I think there is a too missing: Darius’s eyes held a spark of frustration. “The Magisters are ensnared in webs of their own making, blinded by their own bubbles and internal politics to see the storm gathering beyond their borders.” Too blinded?

M. Lampi

Not sure this is the same demon as the Demon Maid, but I wouldn't be surprised if it was. Suggestions: as she continued to guide them and fink onward through the sewer muck ==> as she continued to guide them and Fink onward through the sewer muck We are here to help the people of Neftasu, nor hurt them ==> We are here to help the people of Neftasu, not hurt them he said before glancing at Ralei, “but I expected more of you, Relai. ==> he said before glancing at Ralei, “but I expected more of you, Ralei.

Jonathan Wint

She got to Kill that thing Already! In the Original story the Demon Maid was cooler and more likable seductive Tragic Evil and I got to say I miss that version of the character. There was a Humanity in her lack of humanity. She provided a demonic perspective to Elania like an Escapee from a porn video of a naughty incestuous big step-sister. An Amoral being like a cat eating a mouse. Very VERY INTERESTING and leaving an instant impression. Like Hanibal Lecter! Now she is just Annoying. Now she does not Feel the same in any way and I miss the first version.

Lijwent

I was wondering when she was going to make an apparition, after Relain's death...


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