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Newly Summoned Demoness - Chapter 57 – Clothes and Second Meetings

🕑 Added 2023-10-19 04:41:09 +0000 UTC

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Yandron

So, the first of my "guesses". Just felt worded weird. For that I would have guesses at: "Did you pass your contract by Ranolf". I never heard of this "pass by .. to..". Might just be my lacking knowledge of the English language

Erios909

Adjusted the action beats to make it clear its Harlock asking. Its inferred that Ranolf is an expert demonoligist because he has a kennel. Harlock is showing that he isn't quite sure about Yolani's expertise, especially with something as 'dangerous' as an Elania Demon. Which is why she reacts like she does.

Yandron

Question: “Did you pass by your contract to Ranolf?” This sentence is weird. Do you mean one of these: Did she let Ranolf look over the contract for tips? Did she need to ask Ranolf for permission to contract a demon? Does Ranolf get every Demon contract and can hand them off to others? Maybe its just me, but it could be everything off that list or something totally different.

Erios909

I'm not sure that's how this works. I have been fully rewriting everything this whole time, original material or not. Still aiming for 2-3 chapters a day.

Erios909

They are high quality outfits, and exceptionally comfy underwear. 1 large gold = 10 small gold = 100 large silver = 1000 small silver 1 small silver = one night in a inn, with maybe a low quality meal in the mercenary district 1 small silver = several pieces of fruit 2-3 large silver = one night at a inn, with a high quality meal, at the waystation high quality mana shard during shortage = 40-80 large gold Ralfot Monster Core during shortage = 1-2 small golds Ralfot Monster Core no shortage = 1-2 large gold standard meal, artisan district = 5-10 small silver 1 Power Charge for Crystal from Ranolf during shortage = 2 large silver Yolani's shop, and contents, is worth approximately 5000-10000 large golds The light stones are worth something like 500-1000 large gold. The collateral to work on them was the shop. The payout was 15 large gold each. Which, you might say, is horrible a deal, but before the shortage this was a good payoff, a mana shard was not that expensive, 2-4 large gold for a high quality one, plus 2-4 large gold in supplies. Payment upfront. Feel free to help explore/refine/talk about the economy on discord if you want to discuss or chat about it!

Jim Smith

I am still trying to get a handle on the pricing. One large gold for a number of outfits still seems a bit high, though I am not certain as to the number and quality of the outfits.

Jonathan Wint

Ok we kind of caught up to the original and this is all New material so I am spoiled and guessing this 2 chapter a day Gravy train is ending soon :( But I suspect we are going to end up with Henri being a second Elania contract! And the comparison to marriage is going to come up. I am guessing demons are sterile but in are world there were stories of Nephilim and some were not Giants but Animal men and chimeras. And Explain a lot of the world's creatures. By mating with humans as Animals or mating with Animals or each other and the Essence eating not inherited.


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