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A4 - Chapter 179 – Career Choices

🕑 Added 2023-06-04 06:47:29 +0000 UTC

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Jah Army

How has Alex not upgraded herself again with all the downtime from fighting for her life?

adr

"But it would be bothersome to deal with the regulations for long hair if she did so now." FYI washing more than shoulder-length hair in under 15 minutes requires you to be actually focused on the task and fairly wasteful of shampoo. Maybe not an issue if your nanites can eat oils and filth but for most people there are good reasons to keep it short on limited resources.

noone

I can understand both parts here, and would personally prefer not breaking the world, so to speak. Would be interesting to have a courier ship slip through to deliver a package of messages from one end or the other, though...

Erios909

I can't really jam them together without violating the world building, so things will just need to play out how they are setup until things converge.

Manlor

I do hope Alex starts giving attention to her friends on the frontier soon. This is starting to feel like two seperate novels.

M. Lampi

"Alex signed and began to rinse her hair." ==> "Alex sighed and began to rinse her hair."

Unknown

Alex did not know that Elis when on the capture mission. So I expected her to be more upset when she did find out.

Grissly1000

Glory to Omega!

TheOne320

Thanks for the chapter. I hope she at least checks up on Heeler. I dislike the direction he is heading in. He basically destroyed the planet he was supposed to protect and is now building an alien invasion fleet.


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