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A1 - Extra Content - Chapter 16 Rewriting + New

🕑 Added 2023-05-13 05:39:58 +0000 UTC

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Erios909

It will be on Amazon Kindle Unlimited

Diego Rossi

Good rewrite/addendum. The novel will be available from Amazon too? As I am Italian, sometime there are problems getting digital books from other vendors.

Erios909

the story will start with chapter 1 yes

Dan Nicolae Barzu

This could cause many changes in the story. Especially Alex, seeing her creation and reason for creation, changing things from not knowing to knowing. Especially as she is the only one who knows why they were created. Concerning the entitie's perspective. It does allow you to remove most of the prologue if you mention it here, eliminating doubled-up info... Maby convert the prologue to a human-only view of the battle if you keep the entitie's perspective here.

Jonathan Wint

Alex shot her a playful glance. “Whose side are you on?” Poor choice of words Alex! VERY VERY NICE!


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