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A3 - Chapter 146 – Lay Down Your Arms (Part 2)

🕑 Added 2023-03-28 20:19:19 +0000 UTC

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Unknown

Thanks for the chapter!

Tftc

Vamperie

Thanks for the chapter!

Except Alex wasn't "decisive, rational and efficient", she was impulsive and reckless. She's since learned the value of discipline, and hasn't yet learned to recognize when radical action is needed instead. Growth isn't a straight line, people can zigzag back and forth as they learn different lessons. It's like with the martial arts, where they wanted her to put aside the ad-hoc moves she had learned and practice fundamentals. She's been trying to do just that. It's just really bad timing.

There's a duplicate paragraph near the end: "The Navy’s warships remained unresponsive, but they now found themselves hopelessly outnumbered by the thousands of orbital defense weapons scattered around the moon and system." appears twice in schort succession.

Lordmod

I had hoped Alex would learn something from the Bootcamp, develop some more. All I see having happened is, that she has been brainwashed to listen to orders. She even listens to the orders of an Admiral that tries to kill her, not even questioning his orders because she somehow got under the delusion that she is now a Meltisar Soldier which she never wanted to be in the first place. Instead of being the one GIVING the orders as she had done in the past, she is now the one recieving them without question and it is pissing me off. I know that she had problems being the one in charge since she lost the shrike but until now tenths of chapters later, her character has only ever 'devolved' instead of the other way around. Despite her many protests of not being useless, she... sorry... unfortunately is. It's always Nameless that is the useful one. They are like 'the Blinky and the Brain'. One has all the brain while the other has none. I cannot believe she let's herself be stopped by the invisible wall of an order from an a***hole despite knowing better! She has been a playball by fate for far to long with her own consent. Will she ever get her own will back? Will make own decisions and not overlook every tiny little thing for nameless to make fun of her? An hell yeah Tia! Tia as a person is like I would like Alex to be, decisive, rational and efficient and that even after having been born human. That's how Alex was before too when she laid open the Cordalis Act or how its called. I want that Alex back so bad!

H

Don’t be so reckless!

EnderScroll

I saw your “this is fine” ad on royal road. Great Job!

Jonathan Wint

Alex is technically not a rogue NAI ..She The Empress So Everyone else is the Rogue. Alex is just a Terrble Dictator in the sense of being bad at being a Dictator. Tia Proberly is both thrilled and scared. She basically Found the Machine Demon Lord of Mecha Darkness only to discover her Overlord of Darkness is Strawberry Shortcake. Talk About a Letdown.

She's a spanner in the works for absolutely everyone. And there's an implication in the setting that rogue NAI are infamous for being this.

Honestly, Alex seems to be more of an agent of chaos. She doesn't make big moves but the things she does end up spinning out of her control and getting bigger and bigger.

Jonathan Wint

And she knows the politics and laws And she Is the LEGAL AUTHORITY of Nanite matter as recognized by galactic law.. And this is an NAI matter.

To all the people saying Tia is going too far, I'd like to state her perspective very simply: she sees normal humans experimenting with nanites the same as little kids playing with loaded firearms.

Jonathan Wint

I agree Tia knows the politics of this galaxy and these people better. A people that already vivisected and mutilated one of her own race. She Knows the laws and Meltisar the Entire System, is under a death sentence thanks to Admiral Anderson. Fact is from what Thea was thinking Admiral Anderson might very well get this entire Sector Burned to ashes by the PSIs and there Battle Moons and the people Aliens that normaly try stop them would be busy Helping in the Slaughter. Illegal experiments on NAI technology that can effectively turn all of the NAIs into a Race of Planet eaters tends to scare shit out of People. Not to mention a 28% chance the planet will get eaten.. On a side note, many would be thinking their economy was screwed their planet possibly dying, and Angry Psi Empires coming to devour but becoming a core world would fix that. But she need at least a Psi Rank NAI or better to have the Political authority run that...Hmm I bet Alex is going to cry. But so will Tia's mom... and I bet Tia is laughing her ass off at the thought. P.S. @Erios909 on a side question is Tia getting a cannon on her arm to go with the blue eyes and silver coloring? And changing her name to Megertron..

Rainer

Tia may have wanted to control Alex, but Alex doesn't want to control Tia. I don't see what you're trying to get at here.

Shylt eduardo

Tia wanted to promote slavery in Alex, if she had succeeded, would her opinion change?

Rainer

All of these people saying Alex needs to reign Tia in. If she wanted to control Tia, she would. She doesn't, and she likely never will. That control through changing permissions or adding directives is a very slippery slope. I think those calling for Alex to control Tia need to take a look at their own ideals, because you're essentially promoting slavery with extra steps, exactly like the big 4 are currently doing.


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