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Newly Summoned Demoness - Chapter 15 - Hunter’s Call

🕑 Added 2023-09-29 21:44:37 +0000 UTC

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Yandron

Small continuity error: Status says lvl 11. She was 11 after the Bone Demon. Had multiple lvl ups since then (in chapter 14) Also the sentence right before the status: the second part missing a not? Maybe? Like definitly NOT count on the system. Currently it sounds off

Diego Rossi

Possible Edit: she rolled over onto her pack -> Back

Erios909

I'm having a lot of fun, too! It's great!

Jim Smith

Once again, I am happy you are releasing new versions of this. Two chapters a day is great. I liked the original, and am a fan of the rewrite.


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