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Sigma 16 - Chapter 65 - Intermission – Star Bound (Finale)

🕑 Added 2023-08-24 00:30:12 +0000 UTC

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Eyes wide

Oh yeah that part I got . I wouldn't stick around after something like that pops is cracked and powerful and that's a dangerous mix

Erios909

that'd be another intermission or prologue, but this one does show how she got to space at the end...the ticket meant for irene

Eyes wide

Wow how petty u got to be to answer a fist with a bullet . I was hoping we would get the story of how she ended up in space . Just curious coz her dad seems to control everything how did she even buy a ship or leave without his knowledge

Indy

Love the pic, love the story. Just a bit of constructive criticism: please be careful with how much foreshadowing you use in the pics. This one spoilered Irene's fate for me ;(

Jah Army

Awe shit, pops ain’t playin’

JHD

You have a point, but do not forget his mega corp is almost untouchable, it was mentiond you got put on a terror watch list for just trying to find dirt on one of them, a man with that much power an already shown to be not a 'nice' person whould not let someone get away with punching him in the face. And useing that to send a message whould have been a nice bonus. Depending on how untouchable he is/thinks he is the assassination whould have been better placed at a spaceport.

Nick DiRubio

So I understand that her father is the CEO (President, owner, whatever) of a multi-planet MegaCorp, but hiring an assassin to take out his daughter's favorite body guard is WAY off the rails and seems really out of left field for us as the reader. It felt forced and unnatural. If they had gotten jumped at the spaceport and she'd been beaten and Talia thrown into a car, I could see that without issue. But this feels a little too much to me. Just my opinion tho, love the story!


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