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Chapter 53 - 15 Days Later / Lesser Demon Access

🕑 Added 2021-03-18 06:39:17 +0000 UTC

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Sondrex76

You're welcome, and thanks for the information, that was really bugging me.

Erios909

Merc Dist' is supposed to indicate that it is pronounced with the Mercenary District pronunciation. The Merc' Dist is a mistake and probably should be Merc Dist' I'll go through the rest and make sure they are corrected on the raw files and for the RR and SH releases ^^ Thank you for all the fixes, here and on RR!

Erios909

XD viciously viscous

Sondrex76

Nice chapters. So now her job is charging mana batteries and getting mana from it. That's a decent job. And her Karma is 3, so either she accidentally did something bad, something really bad happened to Tina because of her or maybe the corrupted contract caused negative carma. In "Merc Dist’", "Keeper’ " and "the Merc’ District." what is the apostrophe for? I...I just can't figure it out and it is bothering me. An empty contract and glitching of the system...that...that seems bad. Chapter 53 definetly feels different then the previous ones, the timeskip made things ab it confusing, though that's mostly just me being bad with names. I found a few potential minor misspellings and such: 48 "the Merc’ District." could be "the Merc District." "remembered he interplay of Marcus" -> "remembered the interplay of Marcus" "th a lot less question," could be "th a lot less questions," "seem to be expecting some type " could be "seemed to be expecting some type " 49 "Merc Dist’" -> "Merc District" "since last she checked" could be "since she last checked" "Merc.’" -> "Merc." 50 "Marcus’ " -> "Marcus’s " 51 ". Allowing herself drain down to a low level w" -> ". Allowing herself to drain down to a low level w" 53 " Lucas’ " -> " Lucas’s " Thanks for writing and have a nice day!

bob barker

is the liquid vicious, or viscous?

Erios909

She's had Demonic Self Sustenance since her arrival. Check chapter 7, under current attributes. It is her base ability that converts 'Power' into, well, sustenance. That's how she survived not eating or drinking at some points, and not breathing when unconscious in a pool of water. She still has her selection to do at level 50, which won't be much longer since--- well spoilers ^^" She gained a level during the fight, but only one. Yolani actually received the main credit for Ranolf, not Elania.

bob barker

so, like, in the process of almost dying, her body learned Demonic Self Sustenance and gained a separate entry within the shell's system to her actual status via some sort of corruption? Does she regen power now, and can pick a different skill when she hits lvl 50?

Erios909

One of those is definitely right ^^"

Well, the big obvious ones that come to mind for me are that Tina is out of the mapped area, hidden by another admin, or no longer registered. I'm guessing out of map range.

Erios909

Of course, you shouldn't be surprised if Elania is wrong in her assumptions. She still has no idea of the cases that prevent someone from showing on the map(other than her own admin privileges of course), and there is a big simple one that she hasn't even considered.

Erios909

She can't actually. Someone mentioned last night that I forgot to address that, but I didn't manage to push the edit until just now. --->Looking down, the binding menu popped up, a single press away from opening the map interface. She resisted the urge to open it and look again. --->“Hello? Yolani?” The front room was devoid of anyone. Maybe they were in the back. With no one to watch, Elania pulled up the map interface and signaled a single name with a very specific person in mind. It remained blank. She knew it would, she’d tried it many times before. The only thing she could think of was that the girl was dead. How? Why? It didn’t make sense. She knew what Harlock would say, that she was entirely too attached to some orphan she had only been with for a few hours, but…

Huh. 3 Karma. Last known count was 24, all the way back in chapter 24. If none of the mercenaries died, I wonder how Elania's Karma total dropped so hard. Elania should be able to find Tina with the system map, unless that's corrupted. Acting on that info is a different story, though.

Erios909

I'm sorry if the timeskip is jarring to everyone.

Grissly1000

no we will get a flashback in the future most likely

Elayda

Definitely feels like a chapter was skipped. Too much new stuff coming too quickly is ruffling the pacing.

SabreToothTortseshell

I was gonna comment how weird the chapter was, but I get the feeling that's been done before.

Mai0e

Super weird chapter.

Mai0e

Yes! This chapter was so weird.

ActionKermit

Feels like a dream sequence that just became a nightmare to me.

Theredscare77

Yeah the transition between these last two chapters were a bit jarring. Technically no new characters except for Olaf (I think). But yeah I think there could be another chapter between these last two to help clear things up.

Midnight Harbinger

Hmm...I smell some manipulation going on. 🧐

lenkite

Is there a chapter missing ? I don't understand what happened. Who are all these new people ? What is all this about training ? It would have been nice to know the story from when she recovered consciousness.


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