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Chapter 52 - Collateral Damage / Lesser Demon

🕑 Added 2021-03-15 08:13:34 +0000 UTC

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lenkite

"plausible series of actions" - find this very hard to believe. That child was encountered because two human traffickers encountered her randomly. Unless there is a [World Seer] or [Sen] observing her and dynamically adapting to every single one of her actions , I don't see how everything is planned to such a minute level.

Erios909

@ShadeByTheSea Chapter 53 is a climax of a second Arc (36-53), you'll probably enjoy the next one better.

ShadeByTheSea

why it happened isn't really the issue. it's the "one bad scene after the other" that's the issue, the longer it goes on the less enjoyable the story is.

bob barker

*sigh. I'm sorry that you don't see a plausible series of actions starting from the contracted child, intertwining with the controller-merchant, and ending with the well-timed guard onslaught. Even if we ignore the potential forces of the counsel, there's an incredibly simple and plausible series of events to have caused this.

Erios909

Keep guessing ^^"

lenkite

I get it - the greedy merchant has got a super-skill: [Micro-Second Real-Time Advantage] in leveraging [Demonic Contract Opportunities]. Joke aside, I wondered why the MC didn't at-least leverage her temporary contract until her shopping was over or for a fixed period of hours.

bob barker

Nah, the ability to infer the scenario isn't really revealed in the previous chapters, but more like in a realist's understanding of the nature of those in our world who have power. Secrets, lies, betrayal, and conspiracy. All in the pursuit of selfish opportunism. It's incredibly rampant, and particularly today, the society in which a majority would exclaim that a shorter line is longer due to social pressure leads to the masses having no idea that they are brainwashed and duped. Anyway, the events in this chapter very much fit what you'll often find in today's society if you take a proper look. You'll see how these peculiar events are related as the story moves along.

lenkite

It's OK - I'll wait. Its been some time since I resumed reading this story - so I have likely missed something

Erios909

If you absolutely have to know and it will kill you not to, feel free to private message me here or on discord. I'm not sure if people actually will figure out before it's revealed in the story or not exactly how events went, but I'm sure they have theories! ^^"

bob barker

I'm not going to spoil it if you can't figure it out, but I'll tell you that it's a highly plausible, related scenario.

lenkite

Ok, don't really get why this is just one bad scene after the other for her. Why should the mercenaries just happen to enter at that specific time ? Why is the contract broken. just at that specific time.

Thor Lindsgaard

Poor Elania she can never get a break from all these crazy people

Mai0e

What a Great chapter and what a cliffhanger! Cant wait for the next one.

bob barker

hell fucking yes.


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