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Chapter 44 - Tessa / Lesser Demon Access

🕑 Added 2021-01-25 22:19:52 +0000 UTC

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Erios909

Thank you! I'll take a look, and the RR and SH people will probably greatly appreciate the fixes before they read it!

bob barker

I appreciate from my japanese-english translating how much of a buzz-kill that editing is. Some authors place a comment at the end of their chapters which state: "Corrections-" And responses tend to be pretty poor, but after about 4 replies, most people catch most errors. Here's what I found: suggested changes: internet things to >> replace "things" with "activity"...because I feel that the sentence will be less likely to be confused by. If she had a therapist. >> italicise 'if' stalkings >> stockings The Bouncer >> the my strict >> me strict can't kill little >> can't kill, little is your name? >> name?"

Mai0e

So excited for the next chapter!


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