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Chapter 33 - Waystation Four - Lesser Demon Access

🕑 Added 2020-11-29 14:41:42 +0000 UTC

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Dangerkitty

As mai stated. Her power cap should be a bit higher now cus of the going through her stuff thing. Otherwise i might suggest either focusing more on the hostile reception she recievwd after she left or maybe even having her wonder/make plans about life in the city since she had such a non reception last night. Maybe her thinking things wont be as bad as she was worried about. Would make the tension and now hostile reception hit a bit harder i think and is a good chance to get into our mcs head. Spending the majority of the chapter fangirling about showers may be a bit too boring for some. Thanks for writing!

Erios909

Yes, chapter 29 "She cut it off when she felt the heat in her core, spreading out through her body. She dismissed the normal warning messages that appeared, and then reached forward and grabbed the novice by his tunic and lifted him off his feet." It seems you're right, I have missed a power cap increase tick! Shockingly, we didn't show off her power stat for 3 chapters, and I didn't include it directly after the message in 29. Thanks for catching this! I will be updating it to [Power: 212/212] and Mana Shard 207/1456.

Erios909

*goes to investigate*

Mai0e

Also, shouldn't her power cap be higher than 208? After the last conflict with Taniel she overcharged herself a lot, with warning signs and all that good stuff if I remember right. The last times her power cap always increased because her body accustomed to the higher power cap. Or does she need because of the resent growth an even bigger overcharge to increase her maximum power level?

Termac

It's not just you. InadvisablyCompelled has blamed the same apparent bug for numerous missing spaces after italicized words in his story. Something about copy-pasting out of Word.

Erios909

Should be fixed along with some other things! Sorry for the ocular trauma!

Erios909

Thanks! I see that now. For some reason, the space after some italicized words got deleted... on my copy in Microsoft word those spaces are still there.

Mai0e

Gah i want to know what happens next :D also in this chapter there are some space charakters missing


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