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Chapter 29 - Two steps forward, one step back - Lesser Demon Access

🕑 Added 2020-11-28 00:45:39 +0000 UTC

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Termac

I'm really hoping Elania apologizes to Taniel for knocking him out. It doesn't need to be the most sincere apology, ever. Hell, it can even be through gritted teeth and a grimace. But she should apologize.

Erios909

Thanks Shade, that is what I was trying to go for ^^ The idea of slavery and stuff hasn't fully been real to her. Plus since they had been more vague about it before the earlier chapters had a rewrite, it didn't make her look as thick-headed.

ShadeByTheSea

it's more like when you know something but don't really think about it, than someone spells it out to you. Everyone has times like that, doesn't make everyone dumb.

Dangerkitty

I felt like she already understood them though? Then its kinda a "oh mc is dumb" moment. Still like the chapter overall. Neat world n worldbuilding

Erios909

I think it was more that I re-wrote some earlier chapters, this concept was known, but a little more vague. It was more concrete after they were rewritten, but this scene persisted where he flat out detailed / spelled it out for her and she understood the implications.

Dangerkitty

I guess the whole elania being informed that demons usually eat people to get human forms got rewritten to here? Other than that. Great chapter!


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