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Chapter 26 - Contracts - Lesser Demon Access

🕑 Added 2020-11-16 01:54:29 +0000 UTC

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Erios909

*curses self for giving them similar names*

Erios909

Thanks for catching that! Yeah, Tanyan should be the one trying to heal Taniel!

Mai0e

Awesome chapter, also some rewrites make the story so much better for now! I am very grateful you make the extra effort. I think in this scene you slipped with the names. Taniel I thought was the unconscious monk and Tanyan the one still in action. I think Tanyan should have been the one healing the unconscious one. Or does Taniel have self healing powers? Anyways the two names are all too similar :D "The Martial Monk still had not woken up since the fight, and although Taniel had done some fancy healing magic that made his hands glow with yellow-white light, he wasn't expected to wake for a day or two."

Erios909

The re-writes are definitely something that needed to happen. The beta readers have really been super helpful for identifying weak areas in the story and I have been going after those spots and fixing them! I'll feel a lot better when the content editing is pushed past the Lesser Demon tier, but I can only manage to do so much so week -- gotta write 2 rough draft chapters & edit as much as I can. Still, we are making progress and some of the chapters aren't going to need as heavy as an edit as others!

Dangerkitty

I like the rewrites. I think the story is better for them. It feels like mc is a bit mischeivious what with the "joke contract", but she doesnt act too mischevious. I was expecting her to laugh or giggle when he rejected her. Or maybe like a "are you serious?" And a sigh from tanyan after actually reading the contract before he cancels it and returns it to her.