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A3 - Chapter 95 – A path forwards

🕑 Added 2023-01-12 02:14:50 +0000 UTC

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Vamperie

Thanks for the chapter!

fireok

Wormhole comms?

Nicolai Buch-Andersen

Thanks for the chapter! Regarding the whole 'rescued' vs. 'kidnapped' debate... I actually find it pretty believable that Thraker took her all the way home. A person is seldom all good or bad, or entirely logical. This helps to give his characters some nuances. But if the author wanted to lean more on the 'rescued' option, and wanted a better way to justify the choice, then maybe it would be possible to fiddle a bit with the timeline, and make Thraker pass through the system while the miners were attacking the station? That would strengthen his arguments for passing through with the convoy without stopping. I found it harder to swallow that he suddenly wanted to 'adopt' her and have her inherit his ship. It is fine that he thinks of her as a possible protégé, and that he wants her to have some actual training. But the rest is a bit much this early in their relationship. It's not even a solid friendship yet.

Isley

good chappie

Jakes247

oh and as per usual. -> Thank you for the chapter!!

Jakes247

I can understand where Garasou is coming from however, I find myself enjoying every single chapter in one way or another. The only complaint is that there aren't 4000 chapters released for me to binge on. This is a character development arc in a sense, so this is what you get. Awesomeness inbound though!

Erios909

I'm sorry, A3 has been a very internal journey for Alex so far. A time skip felt like it would have missed important context or events.

Garasou

I’m honestly felling an incredible amount of arc fatigue. I find myself skimming a lot of the recent chapters. This whole plotline where the protagonist is forced to go without her two pillars of support is constantly eroding my interest in the story.

Revan694

Oh I don't think it's sleezy, I'm sure he's equal opportunity kidnapper. You find a nuke, you take a nuke doesn't matter the gender. What matters is that he found a sentient nuke and took it. He's now trying to win her over. It's not like she's unique (as far as he knew until recently given her authority level) NAI's seem to be the most poorly kept secret in existence since they are even border guards. The problem is that he took her without calling anyone she would know to a place she can't get away from. I say she, but it can equally mean he or even it. Kidnapping doesn't have a gender.

Jonathan Wint

She basically a Nuclear Weapon not just a Girl. Was it sleezy? Yes but did his duty demand it? No his Duty would demand he kill her when she was helpless. He did not have a lot of options. She Not a Ninite Cyborg she an Extinction event. I do agree with you but I can not see how a military man really had a choice.

Revan694

True the author has done a good job of walking it back. But the author has also really murdered Captain Thraker. A ship passes through a system where the main character built a station and station literally never heard mention of her to anyone on the station. I'm not saying its kidnapping... because the people were unconscious... which on its own should raise red flags. "Oh they were rescued" Oh were they? No, we can't turn around! There's only one inspection point we hear about and its days/weeks away but we have already gone to far. Now the ship has been too damaged to travel despite the time it took to travel to travel here with no issue. Captain Thraker can't take you back unless you give him an unreasonable amount of money to "fix the ship".

Vamperie

Thanks for the chapter!

Jonathan Wint

I just went the next Tier!

Louis Nel

It doesn't sit well with me either. I think the author has made it clear Thraker is not a bad guy and it was done because the story demanded Alex travel to the inner systems.

Revan694

This whole series of not dropping off a person at their "own station." She Literally built it and the captain couldn't of not known that. Taking her just because she was distraught doesn't hit well. It in fact kinda sounds like she was kidnapped in a moment of weakness, and has gone along with it because her best friend is a hostage. The captain knew of NAI's and had high level friends to take advantage of that. I'm guessing that he's actually a bad guy. A good guy doesn't drive past a girls house and say to himself, "No she will be better off in mine."

Erios909

Alex might come up with something *wink*

Eiren Rain

is there no way for Alex to send messages back home? both SR and her have access to the same credit account, they at least know that each other is active

Erios909

would "Yes that's it exactly." sound better?

Shelbo

Is there any dialogue missing between when Alex is asking to fix the Iron horse and her saying “yes that’s it” or am I just crazy?


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