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A3 - 74 - Heaven's Fire

🕑 Added 2022-12-09 04:55:07 +0000 UTC

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Erios909

i wanted weight lifting, sadly the AI seems to have some specific biases with its training on what that looks like https://i.gyazo.com/151f146df3288417a517ae65eec796ac.png

phantom

In my opinion that ai art at the end is a bit of a bust. Even ignoring the belly button lore it looks.. off.

Erios909

i would like to know your thoughts, so possible i can change it, remember the story is supposed to be a rough draft and Thraker is an important character He's a mercenary and he has to juggle a lot of roles, he has to ensure the safety of the ship and the continuation of the company, make sure the convoy of many civilians escapes the warzone safely, and he wants to help alex and prevent her from being exploited or even causing a massive retaliation by the other nanites that would go after a wild NAI in the western frontier Is it placing the pod on the exterior of the ship with a detachment explosive? The reasoning is that if Alex goes crazy they can eject it and save the ship.

Bradley

Hey! I love your story! I was a little vague because I don't want to impact it too much, just give a little persepctive... I love what you have done so far and wish for you to continue with confidence. As such maybe I shouldn't have said anything :/ If you really feel too in the dark I can try to explain it, but I'm an odd ball in the first place, so it may just be me or my current mood...


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