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A2 - Chapter 34 – Standing Orders and Transit

🕑 Added 2022-10-28 09:16:27 +0000 UTC

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fireok

So she stared into the abyss, now when will the abyss stare back?

Jonathan Wint

Cool 😎!

Erios909

I think this is already covered under the Biological Modifications physical ability

Straven

Seriously love your story! Thank you for another batch of great chapters.

Jonathan Wint

1. One upgrade I would suggest would be have her Nanites removing carbon from the CO2 in her blood this would allow her function indefinitely in space with a spacesuit she just will recycle the oxygen and run off whatever energy source nanites run off. Level 2 Later level of upgrade could be to remove the carbon from inside herself from the CO2 this would make her almost non-dependent on centralized organs. Her heart stops beating she wouldn't even pass unconscious just get weak because her muscles wouldn't have sugar to Run Her brain wouldn't die of oxygen starvation. Alternatively she might pass out. She could heal more effectively from devastating damage. If you stop her heart beating by say shooting it it can now slowly safely heal. For one thing if she ran out of blood her body would still stay alive and slowly begin healing her she couldn't bleed out because the most important thing blood does is carry oxygen well she no longer can die from lack of oxygen. That would make her a lot tougher.

Jonathan Wint

And I wonder if that's how her progenitor might have gotten into trouble wanting to upgrade the entire race for its own good? You know she was trying to literally come up with a way she could save them.. as in saved them as uploaded data uploaded into maybe a simulated world? Meaning to the explanation she kept giving humanity "I want to save you this is for the good of humanity."have a very dark and bizarre meaning.

Jonathan Wint

Suggested for instance for a Gray goose scenario which would cover the entire earth would 634 years single out break. Can you imagine the horror but your planets dying and you realize you have less than 634 before it's completely covered In nanites. If you're space fairing Species the plus side you got time to escape.. but if your not you have a a few centuries before your before your planet becomes uninhabitable and 634 years to know it won't exist anymore... But that's assuming the nanites would take everything. Instead of just the elements they need. Human bones behind because they don't need all that calcium but all the carbon taken from the body.. concrete reduced to powder as all the oxygens removed from it all very brittle calcium. All the water would be gone hydrogen and oxygen are both useful to nano machines. Would they destroy the entire planet taking out the iron core or would that be too much work? Likely they would dissolve the crust and then wait for the new magma layer to cool and then try eating that later. Leaving behind minerals that they have no use for. Yeah that might be less than 634.. the planet would look like hell it self. As it slowly being dissolved. Ecosystem dying.. Having key minerals removed from it. Imagine humans with a slow nanite infection killing them stripping minerals from them. Imagine Alex just saying stop repair...And reversing it....She could rip someone apart and integrate their minds Nueralnets and even Rebuild them as VR or as Androids or even restore them as humans. But that would take a lot of time to save the minds and integrate them into an artificial neural net cell by cell. Yep scary.. imagine upgrading an entire species with a mechanical infection that would take perhaps weeks.. it would make the star trek boig hell of a lot more horrific. But that would be a full conversion not what we actually see in Star Trek. But yeah you could break down an entire human being nervous into an artificial neural net and take their very soul. Stealing their mind. Or she could just put nanites through someone slowly without telling them like microplastics inside your blood.. and all they would have to do is monitor each neuron copying.. I wonder if she would do that to save Elos's life. Somehow I could see Alex doing it to save her live and I could see Ellis being horrified and she's changed into a upload without even knowing she was copied or integrated. https://worldbuilding.stackexchange.com/questions/206889/how-long-would-a-grey-goo-scenario-take-to-finish-coating-an-earth-sized-planet

Erios909

You can suggest future research upgrades they find for ANUF in the future, sure!

Jonathan Wint

@erios909 I have two questions.. I like the idea that Alex gets a list of upgrades that will improve as time goes by.. 1. But would you mind if we suggest upgrades? I used to role play a lot of cyberpunk. My the best system I ever saw was (Tor cyberpapacy). 2. What are the size of Alex's nanites. I don't think she has a theoretical string machines which would be smaller than an atom made out of quartz. But I'm betting the far smaller than a normal human cell to allow for a proper brain neural interface that's assuming she has a brain. Nope that isn't a dig it's quite possible her head might be just filled with nanites that she is basically a Terminator... But what had nanites can do and not do will be a lot of ways determined by the size. One really interesting possibility for a very powerful night human has been suggested by a futurist where the nanites infuse the entire body create their OWN secondary neural net that in the phases with the human bodies Brain effectively making you one giant brain with separate momentary neural processing running for your entire cellular makeup to do that by the way they wouldn't have to be very small about human brain cell size. And that would actually allow backups and even downloads and uploads not merely copying the personality. It was allow into reaction with the brain machine which is what she has now so they are at least neuron size. It's also possible that had genetically engineered body is genetically engineered to allow for neurons to fully integrate with the nanites. But if they would say 20 times smaller than a living cell she could be immune to viruses. Able to do genetic repairs. That we will have that IN 20 YEARS... Another possibility is that that size you could remove carbon from carbon monoxide inside the cells meaning she effectively wouldn't need to breath. Happily recycling the carbon and oxygen at a cellular level.. she wouldn't even need blood to move that often except to deliver proteins and move carbon around and perhaps regulate the body's temperature. It's also possible at that level that her cells might be themselves cybernetic. For instance she might not have mitochondria but Nanites. Basically to do real cellular repairs they would have to be smaller than a cell to do an effective brain body link they would need to be able to create links throughout the brain assuming she has a living brain at the size of a neuron. At that size it will be a little bit like they wear food dye in a celery stick. But at the sub human cellular level say 20 times smaller than a cell you would get to do things like changing a genetic code. When she was created was she actually grown from a baby in a womb or was she literally grown by the nanites an adult woman sell by cell if the latter... yeah they would have to be about 20 times or smaller than a human cell. At that size her powers would be limited by the amount of nanites she has. Also by the amount of work they could do without cooking her alive by the generated heat. You could make a entire body of nanites but there limits because of physics.

Jonathan Wint

I was thinking an alien crew member that was supposed to be this nonsensient animal that was being driven into Extinction on its own planet and has full sentience. I also think it would be fun if she runs into an alien queen that's intelligent you know because Alex's an alien queen.. something I don't think Alex or Elis have any idea of. Yeah that's what I pretty much I'm convinced Alex is the nanite Queen. I thought about her other brothers and sisters.. and I have a theory. Entity was shooting out progeny each one with more of a download than the next because the first thing she would want to shoot out is one that was survivable say 1% download and while she was doing that she was building another princess that was more of a download. Remember she's being eaten alive by the federation counter nanites. And she doesn't know how long she can hold out. So she shoots off the next one.. that's is say 3% download. Then she shoots out another one that's a 10% download.. ect.. the last one she didn't have time to put into slipstream because it's the Omega.. it's the one with the biggest download with the greatest Authority. That's what I think's been going on but there's still lots of mysteries with the original ship graveyard for instance there were ships they hadn't simply floated off in a debris field. I think her brothers and sisters would come in occasionally looking for the youngest most powerful sister. I also think they rule some of the other territories.

ShadeByTheSea

I really hope they don't get a pet anytime soon. It would either just be a side note, or take over the story. I want a story about ships and nanites!

Jonathan Wint

Alex " But I want to keep Him He Followed Me Home! I will Walk him Every Day! Just Give him a Chance!" Elis" (O-O) A Rexxor is not a PUPPY OR A CAT NO NO JUST NO! OH F*&K NO! NAMELESS EXPLAIN! She can not keep the Flesh-eating Space Monster!"

Erios909

Thanks, I had to read it twice after you mentioned it to find the paragraph where Alex called it a him.

Rainer

You have the characters calling A-3123y a 'he'

Erios909

I think the NAIs default to 'it', unless they express a desire otherwise. Alex obviously thought Nameless was a man though because of his appearance inside the ShipCore and him saying he preferred they use whatever pronoun they wanted. A3123-Y hasn't expressed any desire either way yet.

Jonathan Wint

It's wonderful I do not mind mind spelling errors. To hell with all spelling Nazis!

Rainer

So you've decided A3123-Y is to be male? Did it decide, or is there another reason?

Rainer

Completely understandable. I find many authors that make spelling and grammar errors on Patreon. Don't let nay-sayers get to you. If they don't like it, they can unsub.


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