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The Benefits of Saving Veela- Chapter 50

🕑 Added 2025-04-01 18:00:02 +0000 UTC

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W.D. O'Neill

I'm currently working on it, next chapter will be done by the end of the weekend

adorsey

Is this ever coming back?

OkHere

I think if this story was mainly smut, id have no issue, but its chapter 50 and we are pretty much in the same place, plot-wise, as 15-20 chapters ago. And there is less smut. With the amount of characters you have involved, i should feel secure and excited for what is happening, but instead im apprehensive that this is even going anywhere, that these characters will even do anything, and that this story will even end at any point. Again if this was mainly smut, id actually be fine, and cool with paying for this fic, but you want plot too, and it’s just not enough (the contents and frequency of your updates, this fic specifically). Nothing is happening and you hardly update this fic enough for me to justify paying for it. Good luck! And I really enjoy your writing despite what this review might come across as. That might be part of my frustration.

Salvage48

Fluff is always appreciated!

W.D. O'Neill

Thanks, I don't know how I did that since I started by saying Orina. I've fixed it now.

Goodkat2010

Lovely chapter! I think in the Honeydukes scene you named Anya when you meant Orina, but only a slight issue.

Erinnyes

Lovely chapter, as always!


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