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The Benefits of Saving Veela- Chapter 49

🕑 Added 2025-02-22 23:45:03 +0000 UTC

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OkHere

Not because of the chapter itself, i just feel the story is going nowhere and that you have put it low on the priority fics list. Its disappointing. The plot concerns aside, you clearly have no plans for this fic

OkHere

I subscribed for this story because i wanted more updates and now… haha. I think im done now

Nova Sana

I can understand the frustration others are expressing with the games that they are playing. To my mind this is a good way to incorporate the conniving of a Slytherin into this dynamic. I think the narratively lazy path would treat Daphne as a Mary Jane just beneath the surface. This take OTOH balances the love Daphne has for Harry and the others yet still brings an element of her cunning and playfulness into this dynamic. I for one applaud this take!

Erinnyes

I hear you, and I see what you were going for… The problem is just that after a couple rounds it’d be massively physically painful and mentally frustrating. Trying to get excited for sex when you know in advance it’s just going to have a frustrating and pleasureless ending would suck, and at that point you’re just feeling used. Again, my issues with the concept aside, the writing quality itself remains excellent. Your descriptions are vivid, the characters are fun, and your sense of pacing is solid.

W.D. O'Neill

Interesting, that's not how I viewed it, but based on the response to the chapter, I would wager that's the prevailing opinion. I can see that viewpoint, but I think it comes down to trust. Harry trusts them enough not to arbitrarily do something cruel so he's willing to see where it leads even if it means delayed gratification.

W.D. O'Neill

It could've gone that way as well. It's understandable why you would find this less enjoyable.

Erinnyes

The writing is excellent as always, but I can’t say I love the games here. It feels cruel and manipulative more than fun. I’d have been livid after I figured out what was going on without understanding why.

Hakai

Eh. I'd have definitely preferred he turn it around on them all. I'm never a fan of these weird games. They're a step above "testing" him imo. I'll pass on the weird manipulation, just say what you want.


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