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A Lion for a Lion- Part 2

🕑 Added 2025-01-28 02:50:03 +0000 UTC

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TypistTyphon

Can’t wait to see more

Erinnyes

The longer I think about it, the more convinced I become that Tywin's response is where it's really off base. Harry's position strains credulity but it's been a weird day for even him. Tywin on the other hand would want to lock down Harry's loyalty *yesterday* because he would understand precisely how useful Harry might be and would suspect that Harry might know far more than he'd shown off already. It's what Tywin himself would do after all. From there, Tywin would probably want to treat him like a minor lord or a noble knight for several reasons, not least of which being that's what (from his perspective) it's most likely Harry is and he'll want Harry's gratitude if he gets his memory back. Beyond that, treating Harry like a lord or knight gives him an excuse to immediately start Harry training to be a more effective weapon in his arsenal (another huge win for him in all regards for relatively low investment). He'd probably also be immediately looking at his other knights for a daughter to encourage Harry to marry since marriage is by far the best guarantor of loyalty at this time (that's why they do it so much), and Harry is the only known powerful magic wielder in Westeros. His existing plans make no sense because if Harry is a lord/knight, his memory returns and he's been treated like a servant, he's going to be inside the castle walls and a deeply pissed off mage. Similarly any other lord could easily just buy Harry's loyalty by treating him well once his powers start becoming known. That's why this doesn't make sense and tastes bad. Feels like whumping on the character in contradiction of sense so the story can happen.

Andrew Steven

Looks like you’ve been reading too much fanfiction or letting the movies influence you too much . While not an overachiever like hermione neither harry or Ron for that matter are slackers . As for ‘waiting for hermione to figure it out’ is just a ass take the only time she’s ever pulled ahead is in book 2

Erinnyes

...the level to which Harry is undervaluing himself and the disrespect that Tywin is showing what could be an incredibly dangerous enemy is... off putting at best, non-sensical at worst. Tywin of all people would know precisely how valuable Harry is and precisely how easy it would be for someone else to outbid his offer for those services. Tywin is cheap, not stupid, and he's more than happy to throw gold at valuable causes.

Hakai

As far as his knowledge of spells, he didn't even practice the imperio at all. He just did it, first try on the goblin at the bank, with little to no fanfare. He knows at least some transfiguration, however that shit works, as it's never used at all lol. He learned the shield spell in 4th year. He knows stupify. Harry was literally being attacked by a dragon and then woke up in a dungeon. He should be in fight or flight mode right now trying to escape the second he got his wand back. I think the biggest turn off of this is that he's basically Tywins bitch. I could get behind it if he was on his own as like a wanderer or something, but you're obviously going for some weird Lannister/Gryffindor parallel that just doesn't sit right with me. These are just straight up disgusting characters, and I don't understand how your going to justify Dumbledore-loving, Goody two shoes, Harry going along with any of their shit? Lol He obviously has Voldie talking to him in his head, so maybe this is that kinda story. Cercei at this point, is basically a worse version of a female Draco. She literally tortures Tyrion just for existing, and would have murdered Melara just to get her way if Harry didn't show up. Why would he be attracted at all to that? Eh. That's just my two cents, for whatever they're worth.

BEFSI

I'm totally with you here. The whole storyline makes no sense. Even when talking about canonical fourth year Harry, he far exceeds any power of Westeros apart from the Night King, who will not play a role for a few decades in the timeline this is set in. Also why would Tywin send him to the servants quarters without fully understanding the range of Harrys power yet? He would either immediately try to kill him or study him closely. Sending him to the servants is a risk Tywin would never take in either books or the TV Series. I think I see where you want to take this but really don't like the massive inconsitencies with how the characters get portrayed here in contrast to thier personas and character traits in the source material.

W.D. O'Neill

He's essentially his canonical, just after the first task, fourth-year self. He's generally a slacker with a natural talent for defensive magic who relied on Hermione to figure out a lot of the stuff that was happening around him. Those are spells he's never performed canonically at this point and everything you just said is considered at the very least difficult and more often than not advanced magic. There are people whose entire job it is to properly perform obliviations. The confundus is grossly misused in fanfiction. And canonical Harry wouldn't just start throwing around the Imperious Curse. It takes dire situations before he uses any of the Unforgivables in the books. Put simply, he has morals and those are the sort of things that Tom would do if he found himself in this situation. If you want a, 'Harry runs through Westeros with no regard for anyone or anything' sort of story, that isn't what this is going to be. He'll develop his magic, grow more confident, and eventually become a major player in the game, but it won't happen in a couple months. If that's not for you, that's perfectly understandable and it'll probably be best to give this one a pass.

Hakai

I really don't understand where your going with this one. Harry being Tywins bitch is definitely a turn off. Harrys the most overpowered character in the entirety of Asoiaf right now. He could quite literally take over the entire kingdom in a couple months, tops. A few obligates and confundus, an imperio, and he's literally golden.


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