Captive (Completed story)

Shinji

I thought about the older (this) Alain and Leo.. this might become a nice couple…

I've had thoughts about continuing, but I haven't decided if it's necessary yet. It's quite possible that everything that happened is just a dream of Alain's. The boy has a rich imagination, just like you and me. Ahahahaha. And he's very impressionable :) Alain and Leo... Hmm, I like that kind of couple. But we need to think which version of Alain to use, he's older here than in some of the other series. Thank you very much, you've given me something to think about :)

Shinji

I second that. We would have needed a clear future: Will Alain ever be happy as he was on the moon rocker? Will he be free? And methinks he should get time with Leo and they can be there for each other and play around a bit.. that might be a request remembering the pictures of Leo and little Alain, maybe its time for some healing by a naked meeting of Leo and this Alain? I would love that!

twain04

*nods himself into a concussion*

Shinji

who wouldn't? We are always in for comforting the boys... aren't we?

twain04

However, I do have a bit of criticism. The end is unsatisfactory because it is cut off at a seemingly random point. If you don't plan on continuing 'Captive' you shouldn't end it with a cliffhanger. What happens to Alain? What will the baddie do with him? For what nefarious purposes does he need the shackles? Will he let Alain go at some point? These are just a few. In your other series the ending was always quite clear but not here. Don't get me wrong, I really love this series, only the ending is... meh.

twain04

And if Justin's not available I would sacrifice myself for this task ;)

Shinji

Rollercoaster it was indeed.. I really cried sometimes during the series… and I’m totally relieved that it is over - for now at least

twain04

Mr. Evil Git is a serious case for the loony bin. I'm relieved that Alain survived the ordeal but now he has to cope with the caresses of a madman and I don't think that's much better. Somehow this whole series reminds me of "Degrees of Lewdity", with Alain being exposed to the cruelty of evil people and - to not go mental - somehow acting that he's liking it a bit. It was a rollercoaster ride through the depths of depravity and emotions. Thanks.

Thank you! I think Allen will be fine. He has Justin, and Justin can comfort anyone :) Have a great day!

Shinji

Another breakfast surprise. Well, at least Alain is free from this plug and from being bound. But now I ask: what will happen now? Is he free to go? Will he be kept by this man for longer and other experiments? Yes, you finished the torture, but left me with a cliffhanger about Alain.. I just think back to the happy pictures on the moonrocker and now this episode.. Sure is: Alain needs someone to comfort him now and bring him back to joy… this was an exhausting series, Melancholic. And I thank you ending it as a Sunday gift… may the lord watch over Alain… hot stuff here.. very hot…