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Chapter 56: Did he do what I think?

🕑 Added 2025-02-04 13:00:10 +0000 UTC

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Leonardo Phipps

Thanks for the spot. It's fixed.

Casual Ham

"He was right—if we went home now, there would be a bunch of questions we wouldn’t have answers to. Who knew how long this would all take? And it wasn’t like we’d even split the earnings yet." The use of "we" is weird, especially since the MC isn't talking. If he's meant to be thinking, italics are a common way to denote that so it's separate from the rest of the prose. Personally, I think "they" would make more sense.


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