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Chapter 34: What Is A Life Worth To You?

🕑 Added 2024-12-14 13:00:10 +0000 UTC

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Casual Ham

If you write chapters in one sitting, it's easy to overlook small stuff. These are especially tough since they sound the same if you read it out loud and a redline won't catch it since they're real words. Much easier to see as a reader :)

Leonardo Phipps

Thanks. My brain, man; how does it miss this? I'm shaking my head.

Casual Ham

"taking in the site" should be "taking in the sight". Also "a scream tour" should be "a scream tore".


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