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Deleted Pages Dump
🕑 Added 2023-11-30 23:11:51 +0000 UTCHere are pages created for December 25th and Big Pharma that never made the final story.
This was a 2-page scene created for the early part of Part 6 in December 27:
You might remember this was the original Page 5 in Part 2 of Big Pharma. The beginning of this scene was reworked and expanded for better pacing.
The rest of these are from Part 6 of Big Pharma. The first was supposed to be page 4, following the open scene with Gordon and Philip. When the meeting sequence went longer than intended, this was an easy page to scrap.
Being unhappy with the final scene, these two were cut so I could expand the ending. They would have been pages 10 and 11, following the one-page conversation between Philip and Barbara. Put on the chopping block because I didn't think they did anything new.
And this is how the original ending went just to show you how rushed it seemed.
