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Where to go next?

🕑 Added 2017-07-10 16:36:39 +0000 UTC

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Sologeek

Got it!

More story to go with the images

More consensual themes and different kind of executions would be an improvement of your excellent work.

Pcamo

I always enjoy your work. I guess more sex scenes in an "erotic peril" context. I also prefer stories where the victim knows what's coming (similar to what Green Sauce mentioned above--the "sudden surprise" gives the victim less time to ponder what is happening / going to happen to her). The technical aspects of your art are great, so no complaints there (not an area where I would check "needs improvement" cause it's already top-notch).

Sologeek

Probably a bug, because I can't find and re-read them either. It is really hard to get famous on Patreon, lol.

Green Sauce

out of curiosity - did you hide the first of my two comments, or is that a tech quirk of the site? Not that I mind - it was directed to you more than anyone else anyway, and I'm not here to get famous - but I'd rather know. :-/

Sologeek

To sum it up, I'd better focus on telling a story properly with all the elements I already have scattered around, did I get you right? On the other hand I may diminish the number of UHD slides to get more to time to work on the plot.

Sologeek

Thank you, your comments are very welcome!

Green Sauce

I would also like to comment on the other Options. "More Sex" - well, sex is always appreciated, but you probably know most people are not here because there is a shortage of vanilla boy loves girl sex stories on the internet. Let the sex be in tune with the topic. "More UHD" no. Rather less. I think in terms of texture and lighting quality we are still quite a few years from the point where those UHD pics would actually make your pics better. And no, this is not a criticism of your tech quality - to the contrary, your tech and craftsmanship is one of the best among the artists I'm tracking. "More Alternative Endings" - well, I would like to champion the Unix principle here - do one thing and do it well. Alternative endings only improve/enhance a story when you try to cater to substantially differing audience groups. So I understand someone presenting a "good ending/bad ending" variant, or a "clean ending/gorish ending". But yours I have not been able to fully comprehend (which might be a failure of mine) "more erotic versions" Like more sex, I personally appreciate erotic moments in stories. Again, the usual caveats apply :-)

Sologeek

Thanks for the thorough answer, now it really make sense to me! Stay tuned for the upcoming series!

Green Sauce

I have to admit I am generally not a fan of the "sudden mayhem" effects that seem to dominate your recent works. I don't see much sense in them, the stories don't pass the smell test, and I don't find them interesting. So instead of "x is jumped from behind and strangulated", I would prefer "x is executed, knowing in advance and maybe even forced to cooperate", and instead of "out of the blue we see x people hanging presumably for the erotic effect" i would prefer "after a developing situation we actually see developing (game, bet, you name it) people are coerced/peer-pressured/talked into hanging themselves /allowing themselves to be hung - and do so."


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