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Decisions, decisions
🕑 Added 2023-02-28 15:40:45 +0000 UTCI want to write a small choice where Romanus can think about some of the characters — a sort of spring-to-mind kind of deal, where a name just refuses to leave your head — but I'm afraid it'll mess up the pace of the scene. It's the wind-down of the chapter, so I don't think it's out of place, but...
Ahhh, I'm so conflicted! 😩
I think I'll write it and add it and specifically ask for feedback about it later. It's always easier to erase than to create, after all, if a little more heartbreaking.
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Edit: Okay, I went on a long walk with my dog to clear my head, and I figured it out! I'll scrap the choices now, but I have the perfect place to put them further ahead in Chapter 2!!
I think they work much better there. 😋 Thank you so much for all your thoughts, though!!!! ❤️
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V2d12 -
Honestly? Just create whatever you think works, and if you have second thoughts, well, you can always turn to us! I cannot wait to actually see it, if it does make it into the game!
Rue
I knoow. She was so great! T_T
Anathema
Shari T_T
Anathema
LMAO 🤣
emelsi
LUNA LUNA LUNA LUNA LUNA LUNA THE PEOPLE LOVE KITTY FROM THE DOCK DON'T BE FOOLED BY THE ROCKS ROMANUS HAS GOT THEY STILL LOVE KITTY FROM THE DOCK
Imani
Romanus, after demolishing the city guard: *internally * I wonder how Father Brown is doing...
Rue
I feel like we'll take it as an excuse to hear our Romanus' inner thoughts about their current RO some more, but I can see myself having fun with this if more secondary characters pop into their head, like Beka or Captain Cynthia. Even more obscure characters who you could miss depending on the places you chose to visit in book 1, like the Guardian of the Devil's Bridge and Shari from the Chancery, gods rest her soul. This has great protential!
Nessy Lovegood
Flip a coin or play eeny meeny miny moe. Just flip the coin and let fate decide. Or keep flipping the coin until you get the results you want 😂 that's what I did for a fairly important decision recently. Ok yeah I'm not the best person to listen to for this type of thing 😂
Cyprus Lawson
very much looking forward to seeing it if it makes it to us, Ana ❤️
