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🕑 Added 2022-12-02 17:17:48 +0000 UTCAnother week, another gathering.
Is it just me or is time flying as if a large, starving predator is rushing after it? I can't believe we're in the last month of the year — 2022 has both felt extremely long and maddening short.
But that's not what matters! Yesterday I started editing, and, Lord, does the prologue need it. 😄 It's amazing the number of errors that you don't catch when you're first writing and coding a text. It's like your eyes glaze over what's incredibly glaring now.
And thus I've been polishing sentences, fixing tiny coding errors — there was a section hidden under a numeric condition that was impossible to meet — and, most of all, adjusting dialogue. I try to give each character a specific voice, even each "personality" of Romanus has different tics and ways of speech. That can be something delicate to achieve, and I usually just try to get the "bones" of the speech patterns when I write the first and second drafts. But it's in the editing that I can really polish them and make the dialogues not only sound in character but also realistic.
Or, of course, as realistic as a fantasy game can get. That's the most fun part of editing for me, playing with dialogues and descriptions! â¤ï¸
I have to admit, there were a few times I smiled while reading some of the ridiculous things Romanus says. 😄
The goal for next week is to be as close to finishing editing as possible. I'll also be incorporating my testers' feedback as I go — it's mostly some extra choices and expansion of a few branches, but there's one point mentioned by at least 3 testers that will involve a little bit more work. This probably means I'll slow down at about halfway through the chapter. The beginning, so far, has been an easy breeze.
So, again, the goal is to be as close to the finish as possible! I'm so excited to start coding Chapter One and then run playtest and see it all before me!!! Soon. SOON.
May you have an amazing weekend. My house is... less falling apart, although I still don't have a washing machine. 😠But if that's all life has to throw at me, then I'll gladly take it. Rest, enjoy warm, cozy drinks, and prepare to face the freezing temperatures that are fast approaching...
We'll meet again soon! 🌹
Comments
Anathema
Okay, a pocket watch being chased by a large dinosaur is hilarious 🤣 You should certainly write the story if you feel the inclination to. And omg I get your Christmas panic! This year I did my Christmas shopping way early so I'm all set, but most years I usually leave everything to the last minute xD Good luck in these upcoming weeks! Warm blankets, hot fireplaces, and nice cups of warm hot chocolate to you too!!! ♡
Anathema
Thank you so much! And I hope so too ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ They said they'll be able to bring my machine home either Monday or Tuesday so, fingers crossed!!
boomcrunch3r
Congrats!! 🎉✨ It’s good to hear things are getting better, hope your washing machine gets fixed soon ðŸ˜
Nessy Lovegood
So your beginning sentence about how it seems like time is being chased by a predator, I can't help but picture a pocket watch running away from a T-Rex for some reason XD. And then my other thought was "that could be a fun short story." I'm glad your writing is going well and that you're slowly making progress. I'm sure everything will turn out amazing! And it sure does feel like time is flying by so fast!! I still haven't gotten anyone's Christmas presents 😫plus my husband's birthday is on Christmas Eve and I have no idea what to get him 😖 Here's to warm blankets, hot fireplaces and nice cups of warm hot chocolate! Enjoy your weekend! You're amazing!
