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Some quick update and some 'Aaron' spoiler photos.

🕑 Added 2022-10-25 09:02:43 +0000 UTC
Some quick update and some 'Aaron' spoiler photos.
Some quick update and some 'Aaron' spoiler photos.
Some quick update and some 'Aaron' spoiler photos.
Some quick update and some 'Aaron' spoiler photos.
Some quick update and some 'Aaron' spoiler photos.

Comments

mta

Thank you so much for this! There's definitely a connection between the doctor and Aaron but that's all I'm going to say for now. The prison/guard colors matching aaron/kent colors is a coincidence but I like your observation. Evan is definitely the very vanilla route and that was intentional. I do get some feedback that he does seem very safe and people want some kind of spice with him so now I'm planning on some things for him that are unusual later on. That error in the monologue from Devin after the Tarriq convo was definitely a careless mistake from me. I'm looking into that entire sequence(the hangouts+dream) to differentiate them more and iron out all those things I missed. (Same with the David monologue after Lance.) Replaying these parts right now. Thank you for pointing this out. This helps me a lot. The convo from Devin and David about their past relationships to their friends contrasting too much with their unwillingness to talk about it with Dr. Kent was intentional. But now that you mention it, there's too much of a jump and they're suddenly willing to talk about it. It's too abrupt of a change. I'll definitely try to address this. Thank you so much for this, Snowish.

Snowish

Am I assuming correctly that Aaron and Kents coloration matches the prisoner/guard uniforms for a reason? When Aaron was teased I wanted to remark how similar he looks to the doctor and I guess I have my answer now. I thought that the update was good since especially in differentiating the three protagonists. Evan feels very much like the default/vanilla option and a bit bland. Accordingly I found the conversation with Carl great since it's so different with all protagonists but still communicates the same information. I also found him well done as well, normally his character type is done in a rather melodramatic manner, he feels like an actualised person who does the best he can in his situation. There was also a problem I noticed after the Tarriq convo all three have the same "is he gay/does he know I am" monologue, even Devin when for him it should probably be "is he even into guys". Not exactly a mistake since its all colloquialisms, but still noticeable. Another thing that felt weird to me was David talking about getting Lances approval that felt weird since he interacts so differently with him in comparison to Evan and Devin. Another in consistency is that the way Devin and David talk about their past relationships to their friends in contrast to their thoughts about them in Kent's office, but that's probably intentional.


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