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Superworlds - Chapter 1 - Fame

🕑 Added 2023-06-11 00:22:31 +0000 UTC

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Yeah fair

Well based on the first one I have trust issues in developing an attachment to any of your characters 😂

I always want to type things in response to comments being like "actually he/she/they are going to feel/do/think this!" and engage all excited, then I have to remind myself that that's giving away bits of the story and to just shush my mouth and reveal in time...

Right on the money :)

I like that Jane has people cheering for her. I hope we get a bit on how that feels for her ❤️❤️❤️

Armo

Oooooo, there was finally a legal battle over Empath laws! I suppose standing up to the Black Death, not to mention the Police made Jane a lot more relatable… Matt’s still afraid of having his blood studied I see, probably because it might allow the gov’t to take away people’s powers. Nice start!


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