Rabiator
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Patreon Story #1!
🕑 Added 2017-09-24 01:47:35 +0000 UTC Its finished, my first story as voted on by you fine people. For now, I'll post it here as a link to a google docs page. You can guys can view and comment directly on the doc, highlighting what you like, why you like it, and give specific feedback. Next month it'll go live on HF.At over 12,000 words this is a long, rough, sex-centric fic about Misty getting railed by a Machamp almost impossibly hard. It features a bit of mind break, not terribly new for me, but it is my first Pokephilia story, and my first story not explicitly written for one commissioner in some time. Let me know what you think!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SmalNeSbUTRRW4GjdepMT4-eja58VRYVAyUgkMgq_Yg/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
Thanks! The pacing was actually something i was worried about, and thought i might have rushed a bit. i still think maybe i could have added a few things here or there or expanded on this or that. but i also didn't want it to seem over-long or bloated. Happy you enjoyed!
Glaucon
The length and detail you put into this story was seriously impressive. The pacing especially was good, it adds a lot to the payoff to see the gradual change in Misty.
Glad you liked it! Honestly, this one was a surprise to me as well but i always like trying new characters/settings and so forth.
Slutwriter
Good work on this. I never know what pairings I'm in for with you, but I can rest easy that whatever they are, they'll be done well.
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